1. Do you agree ordisagree with the following statement? The most important things people learn are from their families.
【波波老師點睛】
題目大意：題目中含有絕對詞“most”，理論上不同意更好寫。筆者建議先讓步，再轉折。
具體思路如下：
讓步：確實，從家人可以學到一些重要的東西，比如說一些重要的品質和良好的生活習慣。
Admittedly, we can learn many important things from our families, like some good qualities and habits.(+具體事例：從家庭可以學到誠實這一品質和良好的衛生習慣，而這些品質和習慣可以在工作、生活上幫助到我們)
轉折：但是，從學校也可以學到很多對人們很重要的知識，比如說基礎知識和專業知識。
However, we can also learn lots of important knowledge from schools, like basic and professional knowledge.(+具體事例：從學校可以學會算數，這可以讓我們針對每日的收支進行記錄;也可以從學校學會外語，這可以讓我們和老外交朋友，也可以了解國外文化，以及當外語老師謀生)
結尾段：綜上所述，不同意題目。實際上，在學校學的東西比在家裡學的東西更重要，因為在學校學的都是實用的能力和技能，這些東西有助於我們發展事業和養家。
Judging from the above evidence offered, I can hardly agree that the most important things people learn are from their families. In fact, I believe that what we acquire from schools is more important than that from families, in that school education can provide us with more practical abilities and skills. And all these important things play a crucial role in our careers which help to support our families.
2. Do you agree ordisagree with the following statement? Political leaders have greater influenceon the society than artists.
【波波老師點睛】
讀過此題之後，會發現這是一道A > B的題目，針對這種題目，筆者建議使用：先部分同意，在轉折，最後遞進的結構來進行寫作。結合題目來說就是，先說 “社會能從藝術家的作品中獲益，因為藝術作品可以讓人們放松，提高全民的審美和修養”，然後再說“社會能夠受益於政治領導人，因為他們的決策會可以為人們營造健康的生存環境，提高人們的生活質量，”最後遞進“到底藝術家還是領導人對社會影響大，取決於社會的安定程度。”這種結構的好處就在於，我們只需要在A和B兩個面分別想一個理由即可，這樣就降低了考生的思維難度，節省了時間。
全文結構梳理：
讓步段：“社會能從藝術家的作品中獲益，因為藝術作品可以讓人們放松，提高全民的審美和修養”(Admittedly, society will benefit from the works of great artists, in that the artistic work will make us feel relaxed and improve the public aesthetic view and quality. As we know, the classical works of artists is the crystallization of their wisdom, which will enlighten the public. Take Jane Austen’s famous novels as an example. )
轉折段：“社會能夠受益於政治領導人，因為他們的決策會可以為人們營造健康的生存環境，提高人們的生活質量，”(However, people will gain many benefits from the political leaders, since the policies they made will create a healthy environment and thus improve the public quality of life. It is self-evident that what leaders decides to do will exert an enormous impact on every one’s life. The implementation of Nine Year Compulsory Education Policy is a good case in point. )
遞進段：“到底藝術家還是領導人對社會影響大，取決於社會的發展程度。”(Judging from what has been discussed above, I can hardly agree that society benefits more from works of great artists than from political leaders. From my perspective, it depends on the development of a society whether artistic works bring more benefits than political leaders. To be specific, in a well-developed and stable society, the works of artist will definitely plays a greater role in people’ life, because they have more free time to appreciate these works. By contrast, as for people living in a underdeveloped and turbulent society, the policies of political leaders more benefit the society )
3. Do you agree ordisagree with the following statement? To be successful in a new job, theability to adapt oneself to the new environment is more important than the excellent knowledge of this job.
【波波老師點睛】
解析這個題目對比了兩個方面的優劣，分別是“對變化環境的適應能力”和“掌握了淵博的工作相關知識”，筆者建議使用“讓步-轉折-遞進”的形式。
全文結構梳理：
讓步段：適應能力是重要的，因為可以幫助你建立良好的人際關系和處理工作中的緊急事件。(Adaptability is of great importance for newly recruited employees in order to help you cope with the complicated relationship with others as well as tackle the emergencies in work place)比如，與老板同事搞好關系。和老板關系好，有助於升職加薪。 和同事關系好，可以擴大交際圈，在遇到困難時候，可以向他們尋求幫助。 具體來說，我在剛進入一個廣告公司，很多業務都不熟悉，但是我的交際能力很強，很快我就認識了很多朋友，他們都會細心的幫助我慢慢的熟悉工作內容。處理緊急事件的能力在職場中也很重要，因為經常會有emergency 出現，比如說文件的丟失(files),如果你有較強的應急能力，你將會受到老板的賞識。
轉折段：掌握工作相關的知識有助於你更高效的完成工作內容，或者是解決別人不能解決的問題。(An excellent knowledge of your job can help you finish your work more efficiently and even solve the problems others can’t handle.)我大表哥的求職經歷可以作為一個很好的例子。 他在畢業時，向微軟公司申請了網絡工程師的職位，這個職位競爭非常激烈。我的大表哥憑借著自己扎實知識儲備，最終順利進入微軟。
遞進段：就我而言，我不同意上述觀點。我認為這要取決於工作的種類。(Judging from what has been discussed above, I can hardly agree the above statement. From my perspective, it depends on the type of career you choose which is more important, strong adaptability or abundant expertise.)如果是高科技行業，需要有專業的知識，才能在工作中得到升職。 相反，如果是政府服務類工作，需要有較強的適應環境能力，因為你要面對各種各樣的突發事件
4. Students must takea class in which they learn a practical skill. School administrators are tryingto decide whether to hold a class in cooking, managing personal finances or auto repair. Which do you think the school should require students to take?Why?
【波波老師點睛】
這道題目是一個三選一的題目，這類題目最簡單的思考方式，就是從A,B,C三個選項中，選出其中一項，然後說出這一項的好處，然後說出另外兩種的缺陷，就可以了。此題，筆者建議選擇managing personal finances，具體思路如下
全文思路結構：
理由一：獲得理財能力，可以幫助學生形成理性的消費觀，避免攀比心理，從而合理分配自己的零用錢。眾所周知，形成合理消費的習慣對於學生現在和未來的生活都起到非常重要的作用。(To begin with, Acquiring the ability of managing money can help students form a rational view of spending and avoid competing mind between each other, thus making them allocating money properly. As we know, the formation of distributing one’s financial resources has a great influence on students’ current and future life. )
理由二：學習做飯會存在安全隱患，因為學生缺乏安全意識，很容易引起火災。而且，會浪費時間，因為學生完全可以去餐廳吃飯，而不需要自己做飯。(Secondly, there are a few advantages of learning cooking. For one thing, potential safety hazards may accompany the process of cooking, because students usually lack the awareness of safety, which may result in the outbreak of fire. For another, cooking by students themselves may waste much precious time which can be saved by eating in canteen.)
理由三：學習修車對學生來說實用性不強，因為學生出行的方式主要是自行車或做公交車。(Thirdly, learning auto repair is not useful for students because most of them usually go to school by riding bike or taking public transportation.)
結尾段：綜上所述，我認為學校應該開始的課程是理財課。(Judging from what has been discussed above, it is reasonable to draw the conclusion that schools should require their students to take the course of managing finance. )
5. Do you agree ordisagree with the following statement? The more money people have, the morethey should give away for charity.
【波波老師點睛】
理解這道題目的含義非常重要，因為很多同學會把它簡單看作是“有錢人應不應該做慈善”，這樣寫的話，就出現了跑題，因為這道題目的真正含義是“越有錢的人，越應該更多的做慈善“， 題目內部暗含一個邏輯，就是”越…, 越…“，所以大家一定要注意。這道題目，筆者建議選擇同意，並使用總分總的結構，具體思路如下：
全文思路結構：
理由一：有更多財富人應該做慈善， 因為有助於縮小貧富差距，從而促進社會穩定。現在社會中，人們矛盾產生的源頭之一就是財富分布不均， 所以富人通過慈善幫助窮人可以減少人們的抱怨。(First and foremost, those people with greater wealth should donate more money in order to narrow the financial disparity between the poor and the rich and thus promote the social stability. As we know, the uneven distribution of wealth is the main factor causing the public to make complaints. )
理由二：掌握更多財富的人做慈善的效果會更好，因為他們更有財力和影響力。相比於財力有限的人來說，有錢人能夠為需要幫助的人提供更多的支持，並可以號召更多的人加入到慈善行列。(Secondly, the richer people can do a better job in charity, due to their better financial situation as well as their greater influence. Compared with people with low income, the wealthier people are able to provide more money for those in need of help and have a greater effect on calling for the whole society to join in.)
結尾段：有些人認為一個人應該有支配自己錢財的權利，但是個人的成功離不開社會的支持。 所以我還是認為有更多的錢的人應該更多的做慈善。(Some people may assert that every one has the right to distribute their own earnings. However, personal success is closely related to the social support. Therefore, I am still convinced that people with more money should make more contribution to charity.)
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